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©2006-2009 ~nancynismo
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Ok, here we go... we have a 4 page story to try, let's see how badly I screwed it with dialogue.

All opinions appreciated...

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:iconvirgogrl:
lol I really like this. It made me smile. I love the attention to detail and colors!


*first comment*

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I'm only confused when I'm awake. Unfortunatly thats when everyone talks to me...
:iconvirgogrl:
wait... i dont know if mine was the first.. it was going to! DANG!! that makes me sad..

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I'm only confused when I'm awake. Unfortunatly thats when everyone talks to me...
:iconmorb1dang3l:
This is awesome, I want to know what she's on about! I wanna know!! The colouring and artwork is amazing and detail is most certainly not left out. I love the way that in the first panel the first thing she's says is: 'My Brain...is...dead' and then she goes onto to describe her hangover, I know how she feels! Keep it up, deffinately a fave and a watch for you!
:iconlady-rai-frost:
That was funny as hell!!! I love that she's only wearing ONE sock.

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:iconthespaceinvader:
I'd say the dialogue in the first panel could be woozier. Do you talk in full sentences to yourself when you wake up hung over...? Definitely start it with a groan...

"Urrrrrrgghh...

...Brain...dead...

Body feels...dead...

My mouth TASTES...dead..."

That aside, the rest is very cool. The monologue/rant is written well and the pics are great work. Can't wait for more.

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:iconcharles-phoenix:
really great comic... the frames are quite detailed and the lighting is spectacular... entertaining opening story line

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:iconthemico:
Great :D

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:icondarkclone:
Haha, for some reason i really really enjoyed the dialouge. It's witty, cute, hung-over and vaguely sexy with the help of the visuals.

Really well done man, ;)

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:icongreedrulesthewolrd:
the pun on the last panel can be translated so many ways lol.

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